it's 2 o'clock
and i haven't arrived
all morning long
i fill my stomach with nasty alcohol
that stings my tongue
down my stomach to my throat
i swallow
gob by gob
untill i reach the point
where my head starts to spin
my eyes were so red
it look like a pink eye
throughout the night
i cry
yesterday was our last day
today is her wedding day
and now there's nothing to say
1. do you understand the meaning of my poem?
2. how can i make it more understandable?
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2 comments:
I totally understand it. Though the reason behind all of it is at the end of the sentence, it's comprehensible. It's great. But I don't understand what you meant by "it look so real".
So nice and flowing!how sad!!
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