Matrix, "I Remember"

I remember when I first cried
My mommy held me
And she looked into my eye
I remember when I first smiled
And they all go wild
I guess because I’m the first child
I remember when I first sit
I gaze around and around
But couldn’t find myself a stick
I remember when I first crawled
I learn how to explore
Using my chunky vision on things I saw
I remember when I first walked
It’s even better listening to them talk
They said things I don’t understand
But I just smiled and laugh back
I remember when I first went to school
I cried on the first day
And that wasn’t cool
I remember when I first graduated elementary
Saying good-bye to friends
Getting ready, for a new chapter to my story
I remember when I first fell in love
I called her
My angel from above
I remember when I first kissed
It looks nothing like in the movie
But I like to lay back and reminisce
I remember when I first turn eighteen
I looked back at my baby pictures
And daydreams of what I remember

man war and horse

the war is not over
the horse and i, join together
we came from power of wisdom
to lead our man to freedom
holding the power of light, in my fist
flashing, flushing away darkness fall
untill we all
had beaten down the demon
we summon, horses as our guide
we ride them as our shield
we know, they'll protect us from poison
im here as a captain
im here with my man
we take our time to rush through
do our best as we can
we may srtuggle a few time with blurry vision
but no matter what happen
at the end, we'll win

last latter

dear jeasus,

before i hurt in my chest
i juz wonna say thank you
before im gone in a flash
i wonna say i love you
u see, im happy
that i gotta see this world beauty
but life is so undefine
if u can see me
than u have seen my sign
i know that ur always buzy
but can u please
show me a way
to happiness day
ever laughter
and answer my prayer
bring me light
give me good night
no more tear
if u r there
help me
im lost in very deep
can u hear me
can u hear my last prayer
do u know
this is my last letter

i pray

(intro)
yo, there something i want to get off my chest

(sing)
tell me why
sometime, im lost at night
i stay up late juz be wishing for better day
no more tears so don't chu cry
i pray for my people that sick and dying
so baby, please no more cry

(verse rap1)
i dream that one day
we live a life
we don't need to pray
juz a life that we had no law
and all people geting along
but it juz a dream
so im still here praying
watin for time to change
and still listening for my inner-self
at the age 12
i though i knew it all
but everyday my trouble
kept me down, ready to fall
every moment me and dady fought
momy feels stress and her tear drop
now im 18
and still waiting for time to change
as time runing and passing
im still out there searching
for the one who's gonna be there
willing to wipe away my tears
so baby i pray
that one day i won't be feeling this pain
i pray one day, waking up feeling my life change

(sing)
tell me why
sometime, im lost at night
i stay up late juz be wishing for better day
no more tears so don't chu cry
i pray for my people that sick and dying
so baby please no more cry

(verse rap2)
as i stare into the open light
i saw little sunshine
that lift me up into the sky
i close my eye as i fly
travel all over the places
right there i saw her face
smiling looking at me
juz one blank, im back to where i started
trying to find my heart as i write rap
trying to figure myself as i lay here in my bed
sometime waking up in the middle of a night
wondering what will happend if i stop looking for the light
will my life turn bad or will i ever get over my stress
before each time i close my eye at night
i pray that tomarrow i wake up still holding on my breath
and to my people who sick and dying
i pray to the lord to cure and give yall healing
so tomorrow we all won't be feeling pain and sorrow
tomorrow release it and let it fly as life continue to go

(sing)
tell me why
sometime, im lost at night
i stay up late juz be wishing for better day
no more tear so don't chu cry
i pray for my people that sick and dying
so baby please no more cry

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everyday

what hunt us every day
is what we don't expect to come
in many different way
it strain us
and turn us blue
the first thing pop in my mind
when i open my eye
was myself going through another day
hoping to make it without getting fade
last thing in my mind
before i sleep tonight
was myself hoping i will survive

CLICHE love poem #2, "dry rose"

each moment i see you cry
please discribe
me as a dry rose
i can no longer feel the tast
of alcohol
but feeling myself overdose
why do i have to cry
so much
for someone i love
can't i just disappear
and don't wast any tears
feeding myself with rain
only get me insane
but it can never heal my pain

Cliche love poem, "the day"

the day i have to leave you
was the day i lose you
the day we cry upon each other shoulder
was the day we know we can never be together
the day our hands slip away
was the day we had no more say
the day we cry before we splits
was the day i know tomarrow you're only his
the day we had no more promise
was everyday now on i know i will miss

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2. anything else i need to add?

A Time My World Changed, "last day"

it's 2 o'clock
and i haven't arrived
all morning long
i fill my stomach with nasty alcohol
that stings my tongue
down my stomach to my throat
i swallow
gob by gob
untill i reach the point
where my head starts to spin
my eyes were so red
it look like a pink eye
throughout the night
i cry
yesterday was our last day
today is her wedding day
and now there's nothing to say

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2. how can i make it more understandable?